This is our rough cut
Jim King – Protagonist
Luke Darling – Antagonist
After comparing this with our newer cut we can see a huge improvement.
This is our thriller rough cut. Jim wakes up with a shock and sees someone standing in front of him. He quickly rubs his eyes and the person vanishes. The antagonist is then seen behind jim and as jim turns slowly he sits up to his alarm clock. Jim goes downstairs to get some water and on the way the camera goes inside the parents bedroom showing they are dead. When he’s getting his glass of water the man appears in the garden. Jim gets dressed upstairs and then comes back downstairs. When he leaves the antagonist puts a bag on Jim’s head and puts him in the boot of his car. The title Taken then appears. We have kept it simple so that the target audience can relate to the character.
