From these feed back sheets we can understand what needed changing. These Feedback sheets were created by our media teacher.
We were told that – We needed more close-ups and some trimming. And we had great use of non-diegetic sound. The ‘parents’ in the bedroom scene needed work. Develop horror and mystery through techniques. Also that it was a very good first draft. We received 38/60 which wasnt bad at all.
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